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Mourning relatives
And friends that hated you
Yesterday

Heartfelt eulogies
Mixed with the pathetic
Apologies

Remembered sorrows
For a forgotten face
Now lost

Only headstones
Remember the dead
©2008-2010 ~x-SilentScreams-x
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We're all hypocrites inside...

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:iconsiphoned-afterglow:
the first thing that hits me about this is it feels like there is so much anger and pain coming out from few words which to say, is brilliant. good work.
and yeah, i do agree with your comment. The whole lot of us, hypocrites.
:)
:iconx-silentscreams-x:
thank you :)

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Needled stems induce a scarlet coma with flames to burn the scars.
:iconarkayem:
"Only headstones
Remember the dead
"

I love that stanza.

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~DAMusicForum: Got lulz?

*RawEm0tion: Poetic Addict
:iconx-silentscreams-x:
:) Well, thank you. I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the :+fav: as well. Very much appreciated.

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We speak in riddles
Expecting the world
To listen between the lines
:iconarkayem:
My pleasure.

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To listen to my music: [link]
My Band: [link]

~DAMusicForum: Got lulz?

*RawEm0tion: Poetic Addict

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